#Live

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thorn trail
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If life let us go on these
merry trains only
leading to certain doom
or destiny, what a letdown
would that not be?

With no recourse to doors
and only looping futility,
ever pushed seeking
unfindable serenity.

Lie low and dwell
not on flimsy possibilities of the past.
Yesterday is dead as are its options.
Tomorrow may never come.
When life is all worry and wanted doors of
pixels multiply endless
anxiety.
What prize have you won?
So even as these choices are few
and with daylight sizzling
away in the heat of lazy days-

to do this day justice,
is the path of no regret.
On the cusp of mist,
searching deep.
Today there are people to meet.
Oneself and others too.
Even if things
go in unplanned ways
or parallel sways
or derailed tracks
one has not built... Live.

If only we live
with the choices we make
in boldness and with courage
have we partially set some fate,
Too late? Now live.
Too far ahead? Live yet.
Stand up now to all regret.

bronze radish
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very insightful piece, especially fond of "doors of pixels" and "cusp of mist". well done!

thorn trail
bronze radish
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it really shows, well worth the time you'd spent on it

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looking forward to your future works : )

thorn trail
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As I look forward to yours, feel free to check out my other things if you want, I wish I could organize them better like Val or make them searchable

bronze radish
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appreciated! will do sometime, and no worries -- great things are never hidden for long ✨

thorn trail
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I will link dump on this poem a bit
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bronze radish
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thank you!

thorn trail
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and #1164099420216905759 is very special to me