<@&1145760802666717234> Im quite content with this one. How do y’all feel?
#Hindsight
west zenith
inland socket
i feel like some of the diction is displaced--you could use other words to compliment the flow of the poem (some words sometimes just dont fit--dont sound right) ----- other than that, this is a beautiful piece, its captivating and embracing, its understandable and keen, i love it!
pastel owlBOT
i feel like some of the diction is displaced--you could use other words to compl...
Wonderful! @inland socket has just pregressed to level 4!