#The Forgotten Lighthouse

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coral orbit
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um

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is this a poem?

tawdry roost
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Well-written, Nice work!

ornate knollBOT
keen basalt
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wonderful piece of writing!

in the second paragraph, 2nd line, perhaps try "pursued" instead of "spotted"

since saying "with no other beacon to guide him" implies he's already seen it

either way, enjoyed this fondly, and vividly. well done!

vast isle
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I liked this

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Its long and more of a prose than a poem, but the literature is wonderful