shadow coyote
Like red blood
through veins I see you
hidden among the roses.
Crying in the thorn bushes,
waiting for tomorrow,
asking for sorrow.
Between happiness and love
comes flying a white
peaceful love dove.
Pure, loved and embraced
to be back together,
always and forever.
<@&1145760802666717234> Is this long enough or it can be longer? What u think
raven jay
<@&1145760802666717234> Is this long enough or it can be longer? What u think
It's a nice little piece. Honestly, I wouldn't worry about length too much, more so when you think it's ready to conclude so it feels natural rather than forced.
shadow coyote
It's a nice little piece. Honestly, I wouldn't worry about length too much, more...
Alrighty thank u mate!