safe bone
Mind stop I want to last till Dawn
I'm not a disappointment
Like you are saying
Stop feeding off the bad
Feed off the good
I know who my enemy is
It's you
Now shut up
You may have won several
Battles but I may win the war
You will never stop me
If you take me down I will take you down
Screw you
The love will outshine the hate
Go I don't need you
Leave you make nothing good
vale lily
third stanza, first line- won, not one*
second line third stanza, will instead of may would be better
last line is confusing, how u gon take someone down if u're already taken down
better to phrase it as "if u take me down, im taking u with me"
patent windBOT
cosmic compassBOT
out shine is not two words, just write outshine
Wonderful! @vale lily has just pregressed to level 2!
safe bone
third stanza, first line- won, not one*
That was autocorrect
proud pollen
That was autocorrect
Average auto correct
vale lily
autocorrect is autistic af
safe bone
Average auto correct
Yep lol
vale lily
For some reason this poem makes me think that the author is arguing with a voice in their head
Idk why-
safe bone
Brain/voice whatever you want to use it as
proud pollen
second line third stanza, will instead of may would be better
I agree to this, 'I may win the war' doesn't sound as confidential as the poem's message