A haiku-esque poem simply titled "5." | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

sand pewter Oct 13, 2023, 6:21 AM

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This is my first post here; I hope you enjoy it.

Ink splatters—
The pen's blood is spilled;
Goodbye… friend

I would love to get some opinions on this as I don't normally write in this style.

shrewd hazel Oct 13, 2023, 8:07 AM

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Is this a poem about accidently breaking a pen you were emotionally attached to?

sand pewter Oct 13, 2023, 8:22 AM

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I feel as if it is likely talking about communicating as well perhaps - perhaps severing or changing a relationship?

#A haiku-esque poem simply titled "5."