brittle chasm
I gaze upon the welkin;
An expanse of possibilities.
All the ways it could've gone,
All so intimidating.
I espy the goddess of the night.
Your ambient presence besets upon me,
Senating; a sensation so elusive.
The stars disseminated,
And in those catholic heavenly bodies
I witness an ephemeral moment
Of you and I.
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atomic nova
Never heard the word welkin before neat! What is senating?
I really like this poem
it feels BIG!
I think about the different ways my life could have gone a lot and the moments that led up to now so it connects with me
Nice imagery too i like the sky as "an expanse of possibilities"
The stars in the sky are really really important to me I do believe in fate and i stare at them a lot shooting stars are sooo important
oak pastureBOT
The stars in the sky are really really important to me I do believe in fate and ...
Wonderful! @atomic nova has just pregressed to level 9!
brittle chasm
Never heard the word welkin before neat! What is senating?
senating suggests that the presence governs or has a significant impact similar to the word senate
brittle chasm
I really like this poem
Thank you so much
brittle chasm
it feels BIG!
really appreciate that
brittle chasm
I think about the different ways my life could have gone a lot and the moments t...
Yeah exactly! I feel like a lot of people could relate to this poem
brittle chasm
The stars in the sky are really really important to me I do believe in fate and ...
Yes!!
atomic nova
I'm out in the woods at night time right now and there's not a single star in the sky it's too foggy the sky is a kind of murky yellowy brown and im a bit disappointed
brittle chasm
Oh damn! Did you go there to write a poem?
atomic nova
Noo I come here every night but i do think of ideas for poems its very calm here im the only person and I can hear the stream running
only place i can get any peace !
idk if any of that picks up
Airplanes and cars are a little annoying
@brittle chasm what do u think of this? https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1162077905787044113
brittle chasm
Noo I come here every night but i do think of ideas for poems its very calm here...
oh that's cool
hidden zinc
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It’s really pretty and ethereal, heavenly
brittle chasm
idk if any of that picks up
yeah not much LOL
hidden zinc
Lots of pretty big words i dont know but i like it!!!
brittle chasm
It’s really pretty and ethereal, heavenly
Thank you so much
brittle chasm
Lots of pretty big words i dont know but i like it!!!
Hahah those words really fit in
hidden zinc
You’re welcome friend!!!
pliant escarp
I gaze upon the welkin;
An expanse of possibilities.
All the ways it could've go...
ty for the tag! This poem offers A LOT of cool stuff (and I loved it and the ending/setup) but can I also just say: INCREDIBLE job with the "eh" slant rhymes! You really knocked this one out of the park I feel!
brittle chasm
ty for the tag! This poem offers A LOT of cool stuff (and I loved it and the end...
Thank you so much !!
modern gyro
I like lines 2-4 and the final 2 lines.
The other lines work if I don't analyze things, but those work even if I do.
brittle chasm
I like lines 2-4 and the final 2 lines.
The other lines work if I don't analyze...
Thank you !!
hidden lintel
I gaze upon the welkin;
An expanse of possibilities.
All the ways it could've go...
the use of welkin is so
cherry on top
I LOVE THIS FR