poems I’ve written so far

[crude raptor]

High quality screenshots of poems #1161787553427497084 message

<@&1145760802666717234> I’d like to know what others think of these

I personally am most fond of the last one I wrote so far, cuz I feel like it’s the most interesting/convoluted out of all of them lol

[terse venture]

I'd try to reupload these with the source or screenshots from a phone maybe? They seem good but the angle and artifacts on the screen take away from the poems I feel.

you can edit the post ofc!

[crude raptor]

Alright!

[crude raptor]

Here’s high quality screenshots of them

@terse venture (just in case you didn’t get pinged)

[terse venture]

perfect ty! ❤️

replies ping yep! : )

[crude raptor]

What do you think?

[terse venture]

^feedback

[crude raptor]

Oh okay thanks

[terse venture]

reading the other 2 right meow : )

^feedback 2!

^feedback 3!

forgive the shorter feedbacks! I hope they help though!

you may want to edit the post and link the comment with the screenshots for folks maybe too!

[crude raptor]

@terse venture Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it! Out of curiosity, which ones your favourite?

[terse venture]

I'm torn between no. 1 and 3 I believe! BUT! I think they add depth and contrast to one another so #2 compliments them I feel too!

[crude raptor]

I didn’t actually intentionally write all of them to be interconnected, but I guess in a way they sorta all are due to them involving complex emotions I’ve had in the past while or so. But yeah thanks for letting me know

[terse venture]

oh not connected that way! so for me I judge poet's based on their total works more than any one - so as I see more of their specialty/variety that helps me view their solitary works differently

so basically the more I've read, the sharper/more detailed judgements I feel comfy making at times