arctic hornet
Aisles of curious seek-fulfills
For erudition or fiction
Passion within ink and quill
For tangibles are the most bitter honesties
Conduits of truth and untruth
A vessel to flee and a door of ivies
Fingers unveil fresh odysseys
Leave your thoughts reigning
Stray afar our world of anomalies
subtle halo
Aisles of curious seek-fulfills
For erudition or fiction
Passion within ink and ...
I'm gonna be honest I barely understood this poem
what does it mean?
arctic hornet
I'm gonna be honest I barely understood this poem
what does it mean?
Glad you asked! So this is about embracing the magic of libraries. As you can see I described it as an "escape" from the real world.. meaning that books are refuges from reality, as it can be unenjoyable.
subtle halo
what does tangibles mean here
arctic hornet
Tangibles are things that you can touch, and in this context, meaning reality. So basically I was saying that reality is bitter. Idk.. maybe i should use a different word?
Oops forgot to ping.. hope it's not too late
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fathom harbor
I never did a competition but unless the title has something to do with libraries or it’s very hard to put together for the audience but after knowing it has to do with books it makes the poem much more clear the one thing that’s off to me is I don’t understand why erudition is in this poem being it’s showing the quality of a scholarships knowledge before a word like fiction nonetheless as well as the use of tangibles this doesn’t help the poem to me besides that the poem has potential with the right tweaks luck 🍀
arctic hornet
Thanks! So you suggest that I change the words "erudition" and "tangibles" right? Is the overall meaning okay though?
I also agree with removing erudition tbh.. it doesn't match with the rest of the poem
fathom harbor
In the words of Rudy Kipling learn to think without making thoughts your aim
If you can find better words absolutely but if not recreate two new lines
arctic hornet
Ah, nice advice. Thank you for your feedbacks
subtle halo
Tangibles are things that you can touch, and in this context, meaning reality. S...
Ohhh makees much more sense now
you gotta give it a title that makes the meaning of the poem obvious tho
like then the poem is really beautiful
otherwise there's not much context to bounce off