#sweet disaster☁

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abstract thunder
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Your cologne lingers even in another city
I don't know what is wrong with me
Oh I hate that you make me smile at the simplest things that you do
This all feels so new
And I hate that I try to find you in every crowded room
My friends think that I'm a fool
Cause my days are filled with you
And I wish you'd whisper a cute adieu

I think that every person in this room is stupid
Except you
Your something I never knew I needed
Don't know what's got me addicted
To you

Skies are turning blue
These feelings are so new
Oh how I wish you'd want me too
Everything was fine till I met you
Sweetest disaster that ever occured to me
Say you'll never let go and then we'll leave
Sweet disaster

abstract thunder
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<@&1144090752457113794> <@&1145760802666717234>

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(I would give feedback but I have school soon)

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Ohh

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That's okay

rich token
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HUHU

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10/10

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best beginer poem i saw in a while

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beginner*

abstract thunder
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Dang- I thought my poems were good (/j /j)

rich token
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i mean you can look at it and look disgusted lol

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you should work on punctuation

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@abstract thunder

abstract thunder
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The last line of the first... paragraph(?) Seems a little chunky but that could also just be my preference

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Anyways- I'm not actually gonna go to school

abstract thunder
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WAIT

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I spelt that wrong-

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I'm NOW actually going to go to school

rich token
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ROTFF

abstract thunder
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Shhhhhh

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I swear I can spell-

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Ohh really?

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Thanks for telling me haha

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I wrote the poem late at night so-

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Hahaha

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Thank you<33

rich token
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anyway's i'll go now

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bai