#“Maximum Daybreak”

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placid dawn
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I’m speechless, stunned.
No words for today.
There’s nothing out here but a beautiful day.

And all the running water, rushing thoughts of tomorrow,
They just sink to the drain among the hapless and the hollow.

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@rich zephyr @muted thunder @thick adder

thick adder
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It's nice and short but it's super good!

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Sounds very hopeful/happy

placid dawn
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Thanks!!! Indeed

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You got something you need me to read @thick adder ?

rich zephyr
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thick adder
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Not atm but I am in the process of making another poem!

placid dawn
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Ok!

thick adder
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If you'd rather read my current poems you can tho

placid dawn
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Where???

thick adder
placid dawn
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Yay!!! Thanks

thick adder
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Ye ^^

red geode
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I love the second stanza really complements the first’s simplicity

thick adder
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*leaf becomes a flame

lighting way and warming this

windy walk like fire*

languid mesaBOT
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*leaf becomes a flame

lighting way and warming this

windy walk like fire*

placid dawn
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You’re a damn good writer imo

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Do you have your work up somewhere?

red geode
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Thank you I really really appreciate that I’ve only really posted on here🤷‍♀️

placid dawn
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That’s cool

north yachtBOT
placid dawn
red geode
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You post anywhere else?

north yachtBOT
thick adder
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Id be interested in knowing if you have any other poetry servers that you're in

placid dawn
placid dawn
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Best i got is a drive folder with all my work in chronological order

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Serialized

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Almost 350 poems

thick adder
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:0

placid dawn
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Been worked on for three years

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Just kinda one big story of sorts

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A tapestry woven in poetry ranging from all kinds of genres, tones and styles

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Happy to share it if anyone’s interested

thick adder
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I totally would but Im not great or reading a bunch of poetry and actually digesting what the person says 😅

placid dawn
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That’s fine!

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You dont need to be

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I can share it if you just wanna read more of my work

thick adder
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Sure!

placid dawn
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And send your thoughts if any of it captures you

placid dawn
muted thunder
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There's nothing but beautiful words

placid dawn
muted thunder
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LMAO

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KEEP COOKING

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I like how they are short but to the POINT

thick adder
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placid dawn
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Thank you

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I have a few like that

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I’ll see if I see any