Make the Most of it You Can | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

unkempt belfry Oct 3, 2023, 1:31 AM

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Everything dies in fall
Deciduous tree leaves turn brown then die
If we are to die, why live at all?

Like the leaf we fall, like the leaf we die
And like that leaf
At some point we all rise

Before leaves die they change
From green to red to yellow
Shouldn't we do the same?

What if we stand out, say what we believe
Tell them our truths
Even if they call us freaks

So before you die do something great
Write stories, sing songs, or be a poet
Be like the leaves as they rise, no matter the stakes

Always be you, do what you do
Someone will change the world
So why not you?

fickle whale Oct 3, 2023, 1:46 AM

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Woah

unkempt belfry Oct 3, 2023, 1:46 AM

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Woah

fickle whale Oct 3, 2023, 1:47 AM

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Stfu

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I was admiring a piece and this idiot

unkempt belfry Oct 3, 2023, 1:47 AM

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Sorry- I just like to repeat what people say lmao

fickle whale Oct 3, 2023, 1:47 AM

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Oh ok

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It's cool

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You did not write this piece though

unkempt belfry Oct 3, 2023, 1:48 AM

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I did tho-

fickle whale Oct 3, 2023, 1:48 AM

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No you're trash

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This is good

unkempt belfry Oct 3, 2023, 1:48 AM

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I have it hand written in my notebook

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(I changed it a little when I transferred it online tho-)

fickle whale Oct 3, 2023, 1:49 AM

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Oh

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Nah nah nah

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You didn't write the last 2 paragraphs

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Nah nah nah

unkempt belfry Oct 3, 2023, 1:49 AM

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fickle whale No you're trash

Also bruh- idk what ur talking about- my poems are great (or at least good- or okay- or... alright I suppose...)

unkempt belfry Oct 3, 2023, 1:49 AM

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fickle whale You didn't write the last 2 paragraphs

BRUH

fickle whale Oct 3, 2023, 1:49 AM

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I don't believe this shi

unkempt belfry Oct 3, 2023, 1:49 AM

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Yea I did

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I am a master

fickle whale Oct 3, 2023, 1:50 AM

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If losing

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Was a master

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You'd have a PhD

unkempt belfry Oct 3, 2023, 1:50 AM

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Frfr

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But still

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I did write it

fickle whale Oct 3, 2023, 1:50 AM

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STFU

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I DON'T BELIEVE YOU

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GOODBYE

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I'M SAVING THIS PIECE FOR SOMEONE

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CTRL C CTRL V

unkempt belfry Oct 3, 2023, 1:53 AM

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BRUH

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BRUH NAH-

ancient parcel Oct 3, 2023, 5:02 AM

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I’ll review a little later, I just woke up.

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Here, I tested it. You accidentally identically made a statement from an engineering website, but that’s it,

fickle whale Oct 3, 2023, 5:09 AM

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What

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Why'd you ping ne

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Me*

ancient parcel Oct 3, 2023, 5:09 AM

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I tested for plagiarism, or copying from someone else, and there is nothing copied.

fickle whale Oct 3, 2023, 5:10 AM

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I know, it's a joke my friend.

ancient parcel Oct 3, 2023, 5:10 AM

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Ah. I misunderstood, I apologise.

fickle whale Oct 3, 2023, 5:10 AM

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No problem 👍🏽

unkempt belfry Oct 3, 2023, 1:45 PM

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ancient parcel Here, I tested it. You accidentally identically made a statement from an enginee...

What

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Engineering website???

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Lmao

late jackal Oct 4, 2023, 2:02 AM

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I'm quite new to the world of poetry, so its difficult to put my words together on how this piece makes me feel.

I see a connection between the changing seasons and the nature of how we as humans change the same. How like how the seasons are finite so is human life and through how they shift we can find a reason to bloom.

A call to embrace your eccentricities and wave them proudly and embrace your skills because even if you believe yourself to have limits that doesn't mean the world sees you the same.

I find this to be quite lovely!!!

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And very inspirational ~

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If theres anything I adore about poetry its the ability to ground the human experience with visuals and metaphors we recognize~

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Thank you for sharing this ~

unkempt belfry Oct 4, 2023, 2:06 AM

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late jackal Thank you for sharing this ~

Thank you for the feedback!

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<3

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