melancholia

[kind raptor]

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[humble herald]

Space is dark without light. But there’s nothing saying that space is a bad thing, even when dark.
It allows things to move after all…
I’m trying to hit a subconscious target… I’m not sure if I’m hitting it or not…

Least be said your igniting the search with this piece. Very nice person 👍 👍

[elfin stone]

This is an amazing poem!

My honest opinion:

It has some of the following

1. Sound and Tone
2. Punctuation and Format
3. Descriptive Imagery
4. Figures of speech, and/or figurative language
   And those are all things that a good poem has!

And if I may, can I narrate it?

[kind raptor]

somewhat yes and no, idk what I was truly aiming for, I just honestly just wrote anything that came to mind, but thanks!

[kind raptor]

Yes, you may!!

[elfin stone]

Ok great

^narration