#A Man of Culture!

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wraith brook
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He who only talks when needed,
And doesnt say a word otherwise.
He who acts humble before nobles
And humbler among indigent eyes.

He who never kneels before someone,
Nor looks down on the weak
He who is the most cliche,
Yet is the most unique.

He who leads the crowd of men,
But doesn't care much.
He who lives with Kings and Barons,
But never loses his common touch.

He who works like an ox,
Has fox's wit and an eagle eye.
He who never shows greed,
And never does he lie.

He who never forgets his roots
Nor lets down his stature,
Is the finest example of
A Man of Culture!!!

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heady quiver
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oo i like it!

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although i feel like even though you just used words like nor twice, it makes it feel like a mouthful you know? Im not the best at feedback but try making the poem lighter if you get what i mean❤️

wraith brook
heady quiver
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np!

mental bridge
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This is really nicee

heady quiver
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as i said, take it with a grain of salt since im not the best

wraith brook
mental bridge
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The comparisons are amazing

wraith brook
heady quiver
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❤️

wraith brook
jade crescentBOT
toxic harbor
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I don't have good suggestions but I want to comment to show my appreciation for this poem <3

light oak
wraith brook
wraith brook
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If you find it difficult to find inspiration for poem, i urge you to read more poetry by poets like Robert Frost, James Kirkup, and other famous poets. Also you can read the poems uploaded in this server

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You can start by writing about everyday things like a feeling, a notion or a thing.. With time, you will start getting sudden ideas for your new projects

supple venture
wraith brook
supple venture
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Discord broke itself

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Even i can't listen

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🗿

wraith brook
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😅

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So what was it about?

supple venture
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I was reading your poem

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Voice cover

wraith brook
supple venture
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Alr

wraith brook
jade crescentBOT