sterile ocean
as my eyes gently closed
to go back to sleep, i heard the birds
outside whistling, after counting more
than a thousand sheep
i stretched myself to wake up
and saw that i was lying outside among
the flowers, with a smile on my face
as if the wind blew through the greenish grass
i dreamed that i was happy and full of grace
so i pulled once more, gently at the tip
of my sheet, with the singing of the birds
that spoke into my dreams
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noble kiln
I LOVE THIS PIECE! Great musicality I feel and the content is a breath if fresh air! I checked out your other ones too and enjoyed them - your variety in topics, tone, and devices is good I think! Thanks for sharing yo!
sterile ocean
I LOVE THIS PIECE! Great musicality I feel and the content is a breath if fresh ...
thank u, i appreciate this very much! i go read yours to, if i can find them new to this. but thank u a lot 🌈
noble kiln
thank u, i appreciate this very much! i go read yours to, if i can find them new...
absolutely it'll be nice seeing you around! I usually share via my google drive and/or reddit but I will TOTALLY find some stuff for here. There are so many nice people here omg! (And talented to boot too!)
sterile ocean
absolutely it'll be nice seeing you around! I usually share via my google drive ...
were on reddit? i have reddit to. and yes for sure!
noble kiln
were on reddit? i have reddit to. and yes for sure!
Yep! I love this one sub called old.reddit.com/r/ocpoetry, THOUGH: chillin on discord and talking shop?! IT'S AMAZING - and I feel people get back to you faster and the dialogue is a lot more organic which is super fun. (It also lets people chill easier too).
I go by u/valhallatchyagirl there! I have a decent bit up, but not toooo much - formatting on reddit gives me mini nightmares sometimes lmao
This is beautifulllll