#All I want is you

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agile iris
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I want to walk upon the sandy shore---
To hear the ocean's timeless, rhythmic roar.
I want to taste the sea breeze on your lips,
To feel the soft grains of salt,
I want to build bliss.

I want to touch the ocean's endless waves---
To embrace the liquids of earth as it caves.
I want to wander through the forest's shade,
To search for wonders,
I want cascades.

I want to cherish every moment, every glance---
To bask in love's sweet, all-encompassing trance.
I want to hold your hand, walk by your side,
To be the one by you,
I want you to be my bride.

I want to write our love story, bold and true---
To spend my life loving no one else but you.
I want to see you laugh with every bit of your soul,
To make you feel complete,
I want to make you whole.

midnight yarrow
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this is so beautifully written, i really love the warmth of it. the whole poem flows together very well. ❤️❤️

agile iris
midnight yarrow
agile iris
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i.e. saying “I want to taste the sea breeze on your tender lips”, small things like that.

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Would you think that would be better? It’s a genuine question because I don’t want to damage it or make it worse in any way.

midnight yarrow
midnight yarrow