#poem for her#9

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lapis echo
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A profound meaning your name carries ,starlit night, beauty nocturnal , lovely essence ,or subtle Twilight

Your personality a mix of all goodies silly,smart,clumsy, jolly all this paired with you feeling no fright

Your trace impactful, joyous paths you paint
Looking at you blushing ;man I'm gonna faint
Your ability to explain things ,an ex-atheist now a saint
Your beauty surreal describing it seems impossible words under constraint

My day starts with your thought
Occupying my mind for the rest
Even in the sleep you don't leave
Me, your presence brings a zest

Sorry for not posting for a while I was in vacation, and she says daily is too much for me so I'm gonna write these like twice a month or something

gaunt loom
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Dude Your poems about her are always so beautiful. They're gorgeous! I hope she sees that.
Honestly you've been my inspiration to writing love poems since i entered the server. Your ideas and commitment to this is outstanding!!wow
Thank you for sharing all of these!!

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@lapis echo

lapis echo
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omg thank you so much bro

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you dont understand how much this means to me

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i quit poetery cus my friends said it was terrible i kinda got a lil hurt

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but now

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i think i'll start again

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thank you so much mate! @gaunt loom

gaunt loom
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Omg no, thank you so much!!
wow Your friends might not see the beauty in your words, but please dont let that make you quit!! These poems are amazing and im sure you are too!!! 🌸 feel free to ping me next time you post a poem. Id love to see it!

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@lapis echo

valid anchor
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Many people here, many whom I know personally, would love this poem!

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I'm excited to read more ❤️

tall cape
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all i can say is WOW she’s very lucky to have someone like you

agile coveBOT
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*all i can say is

WOW she’s very lucky to

have someone like you*

- caleb.c.d
lapis echo
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I appreciate yall sooo much I've been depressed for quite a few days and this like lit a spark of joy in me I'm feeling better now thank you so much from the bottom of my heart

slate moatBOT
gaunt loom
lapis echo
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That's so sweet!

lapis echo
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hey yall i need help

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i've been writing poems for her for a while now

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and i have written appx 80-100 poems about her

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and i feel like im being repetitive

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what do i do

gaunt loom
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maybe if youre writing using more metaphors about her- try using metaphors to describe things that she does. Her Actions, her behaviours, her glow, her way of thinking. Instead of just describing her characteristics like appearence, or who she is(eyes, voice, personality, etc.)

lapis echo
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thats a good idea!

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thanks!

gaunt loom
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I also usually try to listen to random love songs and take inspiration from those!

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@lapis echo

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Mostly I'd recomend Laufey

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She makes some beautiful lyrics and its so enchanting

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I can send you a playlist if you're interested.
But anyways yeah, pay attention to the lyrics, see how it applies to the person you're directing the poem to, and change it up a little bit. From there create your poem with the line made inspired

lapis echo
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oh

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i've always thought of doing that

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but

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i thought it would just be fancy plagarism

gaunt loom
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Idk. Id just take a inspiration and create a line based on the song, and from there create the rest of the poem

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Poetry is something personal. I dont publicate or post all my poems so i dont really think too much of it

lapis echo
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yeah but i would get a guilt feeling like i didnt write this i just copied it