#Human Dichotomy

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native flume
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Within our hearts, a dance of joy unfurls,
Where bonds are forged, two souls entwined,
In tender whispers, secrets shared like pearls.

Yet, in this fragile world, love's not confined,
For distance grows, like shadows lengthening,
In fractured hearts, the fading ties we find.

Through highs and lows, our hearts' endeavoring,
We taste the sweetest nectar life bestows,
And, in its bitter dregs, we keep on savoring.
For once again, cycles' repetition, we shall say hello.

lucid fable
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I really like the message and style!! Can you maybe expand on what made you choose to try this style and the reasoning behind the specific choices you made in the structure?

native flume
lucid fable
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neat!!!

native flume
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I'm getting more exposed to poets such as Robert Frost, Langston Hughes, etc

lucid fable
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very cool, thanks for sharing

native flume
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What would be your feedback? I'd love to hear it!

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I see, I see

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I believe it to be a mixture of both