#(Ali) The darkest parade

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knotty yacht
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The revolution has started
Sky turned black
And death stands no one

Run Run before its to late
For when the parader
Comes and steals
Our life

You can't will it all away
It's prophesized
It will happen

We are blinded by
The Black Vail
Sleep it will
Stop your pain and suffering

Think of your mother
And smile
As the parader
Steals you soul

As we say
So long and goodnight

dapper plank
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It has a exciting flow into it , I love it. Is seems like death ? Or peace or both seems the person is at peace even in death tho seems like "its to late" makes me think like is the linking connection to lire that the person hold onto ? Is a interesting poem

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I feel tho , there's two person narrating the poem

knotty yacht
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And the darkest parade isn't the end it's the second to last poem in the series and it's when it's about to end

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Ignore that other comment it was about a different poem in the same series

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By the way the last poem is breathe which I've already posted into the discord server if you want to try and find it

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knotty yacht
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Never mind I guess I didn't post it yet

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I'll do that right now

dapper plank
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That's the first right then after is this ?

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Do u want to put like "The darkest parade 1 and 2"

knotty yacht
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No it's a third person view

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What I was describing before was breathe I got the two messed up

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Those are the names of the poems in the series

dapper plank
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Oh! And thank you I was getting confused . I see

knotty yacht
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I'll send the last one may death never stop you

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The one in Spanish is the original version of May death never stop you

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knotty yacht
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No life? what is that! is the first breathe is the last

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knotty yacht
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So it goes life? what's that!, May death never stop you, the darkest parade, breathe

dapper plank
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I see , so ur gonna post all of them?

knotty yacht
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Yes I already posted all of them

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I just posted may death never stop you

winged flumeBOT
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knotty yacht
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It's not in order with the way that I sent them but I sent the order in here

dapper plank
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Ok thank you

knotty yacht
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And then I posted my first poem dusk till Dawn also if you want to read that it's a longer poem

knotty yacht
dapper plank
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U wrote some of ur poems in Spanish, ? And translated it ?

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knotty yacht
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And the one I just sent is the original May death never stop you in Spanish

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knotty yacht
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Ok

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And then when you're done reading them if you can't piece together the storyline tell me and then I'll tell you what the storyline is

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knotty yacht
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I did

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Its ¡Que la muerte nunca te detenga!

dapper plank
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Is there a english one ?... I don't understand Spanish sadly

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:/

knotty yacht
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Yeah that's may death never stop you

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I posted the English one first

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The Spanish one is just the original

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That's why I may just never stop you is titled may just never stop you (English version)

dapper plank
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Oh I see , I thought u just posted the Spanish one

knotty yacht
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No I posted both versions

dapper plank
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Alright

knotty yacht
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I want you to try to piece together the storyline tho

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But if you can't ask me then I'll tell you

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knotty yacht
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Ok

dapper plank
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I hope so

knotty yacht
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Have fun with it

dapper plank
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Alright

knotty yacht
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Btw did you notice the MCR reference in this poem

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knotty yacht
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It's at the end it's so long and good night

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It's a reference to the song lyric in the song Helena so long and goodnight

dapper plank
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I see , that's nice. Is 4am here I got to sleep goodnight.

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I'll let uk tmr.

knotty yacht
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Ok good night

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*Oh btw , I

wrote my first poem. Could I

here ur thoughts on it*

- qulfa
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knotty yacht
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Ok

mortal pilot
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Is this a group?

knotty yacht
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No

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(Ali) The darkest parade

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