for school pls tell me if u think this will pass | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

ripe spear Sep 5, 2023, 2:32 AM

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for school i need to know if it’s good or what i need to improve

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first time making a poem btw

spark spade Sep 5, 2023, 2:53 AM

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What grade are u in if u don’t mind me asking

ripe spear Sep 6, 2023, 12:51 AM

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9

spark spade Sep 6, 2023, 1:03 AM

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I think you can use stronger words for that level of English

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For an example, the words “glad” and “sad” could definitely be improved

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And describing her hair as black could be expanded

thin birch Sep 12, 2023, 2:27 PM

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OH MY GOD THIS IS AMAZING WHAT

#for school pls tell me if u think this will pass