primordial

[old cave]

from bone broth, this soup—
strain God and bacterium
foams, so thus: Woman

[mint wind]

I like the idea but your haiku doesn't follow the normal structure of a haiku, which usually has lines with 5, 7 and 5 syllables

[old cave]

ah when i wrote this i counted the 5-7-5 structure, let me see where i got the syllables wrong

i assume it's with the second line

[mint wind]

You can also check it using haiku bot

[old cave]

i checked with this so hrm

[bold ginkgo]

Wonderful! @old cave has just pregressed to level 2!

[old cave]

haikubot thou deceivest me

[mint wind]

Hmm

[old cave]

may need the haiku master @silver mango on the case (is this 5-7-5)

[mint wind]

From bone broth, this soup—
Straining God and bacterium,
Foam, thus: Woman's truth.

[summer barn]

*From bone broth, this soup—

Straining God and bacterium,

Foam, thus: Woman's truth.*

- crimsonprowler

[silver mango]

Bactarium is 3 syllables?

But bacteria is 4?

I don't understand the logic

Haiku bot just seems wrong. No way bacterium is theee syllables right?

[summer barn]

*Haiku bot just seems

wrong. No way bacterium is

theee syllables right?*

- fingibbo

[mint wind]

LMAOO

[silver mango]

Pls haiku bot, spare me

[old cave]

i declare haikubot wrong on this one

@summer barn moron!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤬