tall barn
They screamed my name as I walked down the hall
They probably didn't expect me
But I was there, I had to see them
We had a nice conversation
We joked around a lot
I'm going to miss them
I left the building and cried
That's so stupid though?
This new year won't be that bad
it hurts to leave them
Next Wednesday they will officially be in the past
I will miss them, but they are just teachers...
Right?
<@&1116088175618699345> I know this isn't exactly a poem... But I'm going to miss them so so much I can't even explain it
lapis thicket
awwwwwe this is such a sweet piece as someone who is in school to be a teacher 😭😭😭
i felt the exact same way in k-12 school each summer, i cried every last day even though i knew i'd see them again!
tall barn
It’s a comfy poem, what were uncomfortable with it?
It just seems like it isn't really a poem and more of a vent. I've been told that my much more poemy poems were barely poems, so what makes this one anything close to a poem?
faint willow
Poetry tries to play with words - how you can turn different thing to nouns or how rhythmic you can put your pieces to be
You can make a difference by turning your telling lines (ie, the dog was running into the wild) into showing lines (ie, and it’s paws were gallant, whispered winds brush on leg and, it was gone)
Something alone those lines
tall barn
i felt the exact same way in k-12 school each summer, i cried every last day eve...
Yeah 😭 this was from meet the teacher day today 😭
tall barn
You can make a difference by turning your _telling_ lines (ie, the dog was runni...
Tysm I'll try
faint willow
Go into each line and show not tell your reader how you feel ((:
If it gets too hard then take a break and comeback to it
You got this!
tall barn
If it gets too hard then take a break and comeback to it
Yeah I think I will go to sleep first as it's getting late...
I'll tag you when I've worked on it?
faint willow
I'll tag you when I've worked on it?
Absolutely ((: I’m open!