nimble violet
"Give me a sip of your love
In the heat of the moment
When my heart is engulfed in flames
And tears run down my face
Light up a flare
In my darkest nights
Even though your love
Isn't stronger than hunger
Because you come to me
When your stomach rumbles
And I come to you
As my heart crumbles"
median valley
This poem hits home for me. The way it talks about seeking comfort in the middle of chaos is so relatable. I've felt that need for someone's love to be like a guiding light in my darkest moments. And the honesty about love not always being enough, just like a snack not curing real hunger, really speaks volumes.
I think adding some personal experiences or specific details could make the emotions even more powerful. It's like letting the reader step into your shoes and feel what you're feeling. Overall, I appreciate how this poem captures the messy and beautiful sides of love.
nimble violet
This poem hits home for me. The way it talks about seeking comfort in the middle...
Sadly it's already accepted so it's going to be published like this but I'm so thankful for the advice :)
median valley
Sadly it's already accepted so it's going to be published like this but I'm so t...
That's amazing!! Where is it being published?
nimble violet
It's being published by Aletti Editore, an italian publishing house (had to translate it but it's practically identical to the original) on the poetry collection "Il Tiburtino"
median valley
It's being published by Aletti Editore, an italian publishing house (had to tran...
Very cool and congratulations!!
nimble violet
Very cool and congratulations!!
Thank you so much :) I'm still new to publishing stuff and things like that, for now I only have a private instagram accounts for friends because I'm very scared of other people plagiarizing my work (yup, even joining this server lowkey scares me)
median valley
Thank you so much :) I'm still new to publishing stuff and things like that, for...
I've never even thought about but now I'm scared about mine lol. People will plagarize and then do what with it? Is it just harder to prove you wrote if someone says they did first?
nimble violet
I've never even thought about but now I'm scared about mine lol. People will pla...
And that's why I keep my notes in a whatsapp group where I'm only in
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lime heron
What are the chances you'll see it if someone steals it though with as many magazines as thetr are out there.
median valley
What are the chances you'll see it if someone steals it though with as many maga...
Oh my gosh, you guys are freaking me out!
nimble violet
What are the chances you'll see it if someone steals it though with as many maga...
Ok now my pants are brown
lime heron
Lovely poem 🙏
nimble violet
Well this one got published so i wont have that problem
nimble violet
Lovely poem 🙏
Thank you :)