A Home of My Own

[sand tide]

<@&1116088175618699345> on this one. I really think this is the best lyrical I have created in months. It was inspired from a prompt on allpoetry .com

[fringe badge]

Wow! I love it! 3rd stanza is def my fav and the ending played out so well

[sand tide]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it.

[silent sky]

moin does it again 🗿🤌 ✨

[mild oyster]

Such a beautiful portrayal of a serene and magical moment by the lake. The imagery of fireflies, stars, and the moon is vividly captured, and the emotions of longing, joy, and the comforting presence of a mother are deeply felt. The poem's rhythm and rhyme create a captivating flow that draws me into the scene. Your creativity shines through in this heartfelt piece of art.💛
Always looking for your new and unique creations...✨

[sand tide]

Thank you sooo much! I am glad you could see the magic. Please look forward to more.

[river rose]

This is a lovely poem

Playfully while still feeling very intentional

I enjoyed it a lot

[rose nacelle]

your ability to convey vivid imagery is chef's kiss

i was immediately transported into the serene lake side

thank you 🤍

[sand tide]

Thank you so much! It means a lot

[sand tide]

Thank you sooo much! That was my intention. I'm glad you could picture it.

[still glacier]

*Thank you sooo much! That

was my intention. I'm glad

you could picture it.*

- writer_moin

[ionic nest]

I love it! the innocence is so wholesome! 🥺
the imagery is beautiful too ✨
it's really creative!

[sand tide]

Thank you sooo much! Love your comments!

[ionic nest]

I love your poetry!

[sick needle]

This was excellent!

[sand tide]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

[fiery shard]

were did it go

;{

[sand tide]

I deleted it.

Felt it wasn't good enough.