give you my heart—a.w

[analog leaf]

"it starts as a whisper;
growing louder and louder.
i find myself doubting once again.
to give you my heart,
only for you to abandon it
in such a way.

what my heart wants,
it isn't enough
to persuade my mind.

the fact that you're my everything
and i'm just me.
and maybe that's ridiculous
but it's enough.

still, i find myself thinking of you
more than ever.
how do i stop these feelings,
before it's too late?

you make me happy,
but in the end
being with you is torture.

even if i'm enough for you
i'll never be enough
for myself."

[round inlet]

i relate so much to this poem

its beautifully written down and i love the rythm is so like flawless

its just smoooth

[analog leaf]

thank youu!

[ruby junco]

The opening lines are marvelous! The hesitation of the speaker is clear. The conflict of wanting and not wanting, and the self-doubt.

[round inlet]

your wellcomee

[unborn thistle]

"last christmas I gave you my heart, but the very next day, you tore it apart"

-mahatma gandhi

[analog leaf]

soo real

[unborn thistle]

he is my favorite singer/activist

but serious talk good poem love the emotion

[analog leaf]

thank you! haha

[round inlet]

what an icon

[unborn thistle]

the voice of a generation

[round inlet]

a good christmas present tht was

u shudda wrapped ur heart tho

[unborn thistle]

But how could I let them give it to someone special?

[round inlet]

brain fart momnt

[unborn thistle]

gandhi would never give salt to the british

how could I give my heart to them?

[round inlet]

ooohhh