#A year without you

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maiden saddle
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its really good! 🙂

wary goblet
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thank youu

maiden saddle
thorny kernel
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The second stanza is lovely! The detail in the third stanza is brilliant. My favourite part is the 4th stanza..."thawed it to...like a river." The theme of changing months with changing feelings and acceptance and rejections is wonderful!