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devout knotBOT Jul 30, 2023, 5:50 PM

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*I dry myself off

I am soaked from head to toe

The rain has started*

wide grail Jul 31, 2023, 2:44 AM

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thank you haikubot very helpful

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I like rain haikus

rough niche Jul 31, 2023, 2:44 AM

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lol ikr?

wide grail Jul 31, 2023, 2:44 AM

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this is good 👍

rough niche Jul 31, 2023, 2:45 AM

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ty
Haikus are definitely not my thing but chat was talking about a backwards flowing poem and this came to mind

inner bane Jul 31, 2023, 2:45 AM

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Wonderful one! I can see that you understood the haiku. Keep practising!

inner bane Jul 31, 2023, 2:46 AM

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Oh yeah. That? I was looking for examples from fellow members.

rough niche Jul 31, 2023, 2:47 AM

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Yeah I gave this as like an example of what I imagined, but then @strong gulch said she liked it so I posted it lol

inner bane Jul 31, 2023, 2:47 AM

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Hm. It's evocative

rough niche Jul 31, 2023, 7:57 PM

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Clouds linger over
I begin to walk away
You are beside me

devout knotBOT Jul 31, 2023, 7:57 PM

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*Clouds linger over

I begin to walk away

You are beside me*

rough niche Jul 31, 2023, 8:02 PM

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I want to stay dry
But I have no umbrella
Are you... Beside me?

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