After-rain Haiku | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

glad wyvernBOT Jul 27, 2023, 1:43 AM

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*barks of trees are home

to the guests of the heaven—

the raindrops sojourn*

safe ivy Jul 27, 2023, 1:44 AM

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<@&1116088175618699345> could you have a look, please?

crude geyserBOT Jul 27, 2023, 1:46 AM

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success @writer_moin warned

Reason: Too Many Mentions
Duration: Permanent

safe ivy Jul 28, 2023, 2:21 AM

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@versed lagoon @muted adder @shadow stratus

muted adder Jul 28, 2023, 2:25 AM

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Hoh, a haiku. I like this one.

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Very nice imagery of a foresty type setting.

safe ivy Jul 28, 2023, 2:25 AM

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muted adder Hoh, a haiku. I like this one.

Thank you! I appreciate it.

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I wrote it while I recalled a tree bark I had seen.

muted adder Jul 28, 2023, 2:26 AM

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muted adder Very nice imagery of a foresty type setting.

I'd imagine either temperate or tropical.

muted adder Jul 28, 2023, 2:26 AM

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safe ivy Thank you! I appreciate it.

No prob

safe ivy Jul 28, 2023, 2:26 AM

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muted adder I'd imagine either temperate or tropical.

Indeed. Even an evergreen

muted adder Jul 28, 2023, 2:26 AM

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safe ivy Indeed. Even an evergreen

Aye.

Although the evergreen might be a bit of a stretch. But I get where you're coming from.

safe ivy Jul 28, 2023, 2:27 AM

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muted adder Aye. Although the evergreen might be a bit of a stretch. But I get where you're...

Hm. It's more like a tree in a crowded city.

muted adder Jul 28, 2023, 2:28 AM

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safe ivy Hm. It's more like a tree in a crowded city.

Huh. Interesting imagery now. Fascinating.

safe ivy Jul 28, 2023, 2:28 AM

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You are supportive. I like the spirit

muted adder Jul 28, 2023, 2:29 AM

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^w^

versed lagoon Jul 28, 2023, 2:49 PM

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It just sounds so beautiful
Like how the thirst of the trees have finally been quenched

versed lagoon Jul 28, 2023, 2:49 PM

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safe ivy Hm. It's more like a tree in a crowded city.

That interpretation adds so much more value to it, I love that!

safe ivy Jul 28, 2023, 3:58 PM

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versed lagoon It just sounds so beautiful Like how the thirst of the trees have finally been q...

Oh. That was on my mind too. We think alike, sometimes. catFlushed kittyBlue

safe ivy Jul 28, 2023, 3:58 PM

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versed lagoon That interpretation adds so much more value to it, I love that!

Thank you very much!

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You just made me smile catFlushed @versed lagoon

versed lagoon Jul 28, 2023, 3:59 PM

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safe ivy Oh. That was on my mind too. We think alike, sometimes. <:catFlushed:94547660040...

:D

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Happy to be of service! 😄😄

safe ivy Jul 28, 2023, 4:00 PM

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What's cooking there? Any poem? thonk

versed lagoon Jul 28, 2023, 4:00 PM

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Kind of, yeah
Idk when I'll finish it though

safe ivy Jul 28, 2023, 4:04 PM

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versed lagoon Kind of, yeah Idk when I'll finish it though

Whatever you are writing, you'll write even better than before. I know it. It's a good feeling I discovered today.

versed lagoon Jul 28, 2023, 4:06 PM

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Thanks for saying that! And yeah, you've gotten really great as well so I can see why you feel that

safe ivy Jul 28, 2023, 4:07 PM

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versed lagoon Thanks for saying that! And yeah, you've gotten really great as well so I can se...

Thank you! You are too kind. Ping me whenever you have completed that masterpiece of yours.

versed lagoon Jul 28, 2023, 4:14 PM

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As are you! And will do catFlushed

shadow stratus Jul 29, 2023, 3:23 AM

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Sojourn is one of my favorite words

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It brings to mind a cold dirt trail in the evening light, surrounded by the skeletons of trees for me

safe ivy Jul 29, 2023, 3:25 AM

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Thanks! Your perspective is unique

trim steppe Jul 29, 2023, 3:26 AM

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i love the idea that the tree is like a shelter for the rain drops, the poem gives me a feeling of a new morning and like the world is refreshed

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