Yellow Flower | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

versed tulip Jul 20, 2023, 2:50 AM

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@errant belfry @mild portal @vestal star I'd like your thoughts upon this.

frozen nacelle Jul 20, 2023, 3:48 AM

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neat to see this style of poetry from you- I like how the entire poem feels like it's taking a deep breath (if that makes any sense)

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the tone is spot-on imo

versed tulip Jul 20, 2023, 3:54 AM

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frozen nacelle neat to see this style of poetry from you- I like how the entire poem feels like...

Thank you! You noticed it? I was aiming for a poem that's like a passing dream.

frozen nacelle Jul 20, 2023, 3:54 AM

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defintiely got that

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it's serene, but in a way where nothing's super precise

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big "go with the flow" energy

versed tulip Jul 20, 2023, 3:55 AM

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frozen nacelle big "go with the flow" energy

Haha! Thanks! I don't remember why I wrote this. An experiment it was, I guess. But a carefully thought-out

frozen nacelle Jul 20, 2023, 3:56 AM

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I really like this! I'd be interested to see longer poems from you in this styles

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I wonder how you would tackle deeper explorations in your more philosophical style

versed tulip Jul 20, 2023, 3:58 AM

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frozen nacelle I really like this! I'd be interested to see longer poems from you in this style...

Oh. Thanks! I do try to write philosophical poems without sacrificing the element of beauty. Sure. I would also like to explore that area.

frozen nacelle Jul 20, 2023, 3:58 AM

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go for it!

versed tulip Jul 20, 2023, 3:59 AM

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Thanks! You are so sweet that I feel like writing one right now.

frozen nacelle Jul 20, 2023, 3:59 AM

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I hope it's great!

versed tulip Jul 20, 2023, 4:00 AM

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Yeah. Let's do it. Shall I tag you once I am finished?

frozen nacelle Jul 20, 2023, 4:06 AM

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sure, but I might be asleep so give me a day if I'm unresponsive

versed tulip Jul 20, 2023, 4:10 AM

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No problemo

errant belfry Jul 20, 2023, 3:06 PM

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it has such a beautiful flow to it!

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it just reminds me of calm 😌

versed tulip Jul 20, 2023, 4:01 PM

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Thank you! I really appreciate it @errant belfry

errant belfry Jul 20, 2023, 4:38 PM

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your poems are wonderful 💖

versed tulip Jul 20, 2023, 5:10 PM

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Thanks! Can't wait to read from you @errant belfry

vestal star Jul 20, 2023, 5:40 PM

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this is well done! i also really like the flow of your writing:)
the last stanza is beautiful

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