I love your imagery so much here!
#Desert Wandering
dusky lintel
jaunty tangle
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dusky lintel
It feels like you wrote it while literally stuck in a desert.
jaunty tangle
I love your imagery so much here!
Thanks! It's my signature in most of my nature poems.
jaunty tangle
It feels like you wrote it while literally stuck in a desert.
Yeah. Thanks
dusky lintel
Oooooh, this is good imagery!
I agree!
Also the ending was, dark.
I'm a sucker for dark endings mwuahaha
It took a turn and was kind of an audible “gasp!” moment.
It’s really good.
"And the wind blew fire in my face" is like, one of my favorite imagery lines I've read so far
Yeah for real. Windy sand is the worst.
jaunty tangle
I'm a sucker for dark endings mwuahaha
Thanks! I went for a dark ending instinctively.
dusky lintel
Living in Florida, I can feel it
jaunty tangle
It took a turn and was kind of an audible “gasp!” moment.
Oh? Thank you very much!
dusky lintel
This was fun guys! We should totally do it again sometime.
jaunty tangle
"And the wind blew fire in my face" is like, one of my favorite imagery lines I'...
Thank you! I was aiming for imagery from the start. It's a good thing I participated.
dusky lintel
Y'all are great at imagery, I definitely have a lot to learn still!
Good job everyone!
Your poem had great introspective imagery!
jaunty tangle
Y'all are great at imagery, I definitely have a lot to learn still!
Me too. I have to learn how to connect two different themes from the both of you.
dusky lintel
Your focus was on the mind and you visualized it well with metaphors.
jaunty tangle
Your poem had great introspective imagery!
Ah, thank you!
dusky lintel
Symbolism and Metaphors are sorta my thing haha
Would y’all like to read one of my other poems?
jaunty tangle
Your focus was on the mind and you visualized it well with metaphors.
You noticed? That's my secret weapon. Haha.
dusky lintel
Sure! I'd love to, if you'd return the favor!
jaunty tangle
Would y’all like to read one of my other poems?
Sure!
dusky lintel
#1129896715474960444
this was my first attempt at more structured formatting
https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1129908564819988541
Here's one of my entries for the time we played last might!
rose siren
Not really
It's been a while, hasn't it
I really can't find the time
I'll let you know when I do 😊
jaunty tangle
Not really
It's been a while, hasn't it
I really can't find the time
I'll let yo...
It has been a while. Sure.
devout flame
Very nicely written.