#silent tears

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high sentinel
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Within me dwells a dying soul,
Deaf to the heart's sorrowful toll.
A shattered vessel, pain's grip I bear,
Yet my tears won't flow, a mask I wear.

The world believes it inflicts the worst,
But sometimes, it's parents who leave us cursed.
Silenced and helpless, my words held at bay,
In solitude's embrace, I weep, night and day.

Sharing my emotions, a folly they see,
Mocking my vulnerability, they laugh at me.
When life's cruelty strikes with relentless force,
Inwardly, I weep a river's remorse.

wispy dove
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Awesome

leaden ice
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A river's remorse
Such a beautiful line
I think my favourite part of the poem is
"Sometimes , it's parents who leave us cursed"
Its such an important topic to highlight
Parental upbringing is such an important factor in a child's character development
If that's scarred , they are scarred for a really long time
It's a nice poem:)

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The opening lines, "Within me dwells a dying soul, / Deaf to the heart's sorrowful toll," It immediately set's a melancholic tone. The juxtaposition of a dying soul and a deaf heart suggests a deep emotional disconnect,

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But Explore the use of more specific and concrete imagery to further engage the reader's senses and create a stronger impact. This can make the emotions and experiences more vivid and relatable.

high sentinel
high sentinel
leaden ice
high sentinel
leaden ice