really magic atmosphere
#A Treasure Buried
unkempt pawn
stone wyvern
Thank you! The imagery is what I was mainly going for!
zenith terrace
Fantastic! Imagery is amazing, pretty clean meter I feel
thick crypt
I love your description and rhythm!
I almost feels like a train trudging along, or a boat moving onwards to the treasure it’s trying to find
deft sky
love that imagery
stone wyvern
Awww thanks you guys! It's based loosely off the main character from a Dungeons and Dragons oneshot I held haha 😅
deft sky
sounds like a tale someone with a pegleg and a tentacle for an arm from undisclosed events would tell you
fossil epoch
sounds like something that'd be found in a classic in a sea setting or something
stone wyvern
"Yar har maties! Ya wanna hear how I got this here tentacle arm?"
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unkempt pawn
Awww thanks you guys! It's based loosely off the main character from a Dungeons ...
oh yeah i see the inspiration
deft sky
also I see parallels to captain ahab- am I wrong to see inspiration there?
stone wyvern
Best haiku on the server
thick crypt
To me, it’s giving me a feeling of someone searching desperately for a way to live their dreams out. It’s almost like they’re living their life and sailing on a boat that draws nearer and nearer to an end, even if the end is miserable or not as dream filled as the exploration
stone wyvern
also I see parallels to captain ahab- am I wrong to see inspiration there?
That was an original interpretation that I was going for, but I quickly ditched it later in the poem!
deft sky
and from that typo it's clear I'm getting too dumb
deft sky
That was an original interpretation that I was going for, but I quickly ditched ...
I see. It almost shifted to an internal obsession at the end
stone wyvern
To me, it’s giving me a feeling of someone searching desperately for a way to li...
That's fascinating! One of the final lines was gonna be something like "the real treasure was the journey we had" but I did go with something else later on!
deft sky
like the narrator knows their treasure doesn't exist yet still wants to search for it
stone wyvern
I see it still leaked through!
thick crypt
I love that!
stone wyvern
Yeah!
stone wyvern
like the narrator knows their treasure doesn't exist yet still wants to search f...
Definitely!!
thick crypt
like the narrator knows their treasure doesn't exist yet still wants to search f...
Similar to what I was also thinking!
unkempt pawn
sweet
stone wyvern
"The real treasure was the orphanage we burned along the way."
- every d&d party ever
deft sky
"those orphans were loaded man, can you blame us?"
thick crypt
Honestly.. very true - A Proud DM and player
stone wyvern
XD
deft sky
"potions aren't cheap"
unkempt pawn
oh yeah
stone wyvern
Shall we move onto either beatnics or oats?
deft sky
"and you don't want to know the medical bill for this pegleg"
stone wyvern
XD
deft sky
Shall we move onto either beatnics or oats?
raise the sails
stone wyvern
Who'll it be?
unkempt pawn
oats?
stone wyvern
Woo!
thick crypt
Time to read!
stone wyvern
Hoist the sails men!