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[pine haven]

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share some feedback 🙂

[pine haven]

Me like that it ends on a happy note, writing dark poetry all the time can be really draining ):

Overall it’s structurally consistent and packs a decent emotional weight. Like it seems like a good bit of thought was put into the flow. Good job again

[pine haven]

thanks

not a problem I love reading and writing