#Dicentra

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elder niche
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elder niche
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I adore the use of imagery like "Their glow burns too intense for my eyes not to char" and "And yet they dwell too far for me to know and sense" as they capture a sense of longing and the desire to comprehend the universe. And also the use of phrases like "I'll be swimming yonder, airborne in tangled dreams" and "But something somewhere hums and I can't quite tell where" add a dreamlike quality to the poem. Very well done! wow

elder niche
hasty tapirBOT
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*Thank you !!! I'm super

glad that the themes got conveyed

appropriately*

- .cordolium
neon wing
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Such beautiful imagery! The sensory descriptions feel so vivid (visual and auditory in particular)

elder niche
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Thanks ! It means everything to me to know that it resonates with other people as well