queen b

[lean jay]

@wicked raven lmk what u think

[wicked raven]

My favorite so far!!

There’s imagery ofc, but I mostly paid attention to how built upon each line

You built upon “As if my hairs-“ and “And I cried as if” in such a creative ways lol

I admire your skill and I wholeheartedly believe you can achieve your goal bru

[lean jay]

Thank u

[wicked raven]

Anytime, you deserve

it^

[lean jay]

Did u notice the last line said as if my hands went from hair to tears to hands which are three main things pitside of fashion people note of weddings

[wicked raven]

Hmm, nah, I’ve never heard of that lol

[lean jay]

The ring and the thing women wear in their hair and people crying

[wicked raven]

Oooohhhhh

I can really tell you’re proud of your writings

That’s great bru

[vocal prawn]

Good poem!