Train People

[copper horizon]

<@&1116088175618699345> Would appreciate your opinions

[trail cedar]

I love this - one of my favorite poems posted in here recently

[runic copper]

*I love this - one of

my favorite poems posted

in here recently*

- clementine0614

[trail cedar]

Foregoes many of the cliches and indulgences and paints a really unique scene

I’d love to see more stuff in the future

[copper horizon]

Thanks! I appreciate your honest feedback.

[copper horizon]

Sure! I will try my best!

[trail cedar]

Dope!

[copper horizon]

Thank you so much! That is what I aimed at. I am also tired of "normal, relatable" poetry

[frail plume]

very nice!

[copper horizon]

Thank you! Your comments mean a lot to me!

[trail cedar]

As am I sometimes

[burnt cave]

i love this! it talks about a normal, mundane situation in a beautiful way and it's so nice to read

[copper horizon]

Thank you very much, @burnt cave ! It was written while I was travelling by a train.

[burnt cave]

i love it when i meet people on trains

you have this brief interaction with them, which is so special because after that, you go your own separate ways, but its like you were meant to cross paths with them
not just meeting people on trains, meeting people in general
connections between humans is such a wonderful thing, i feel like we take it for granted sometimes

[austere atlas]

Each line is like a brushstroke, painting vivid pictures in my mind and stirring my soul.
Thank you for sharing your exquisite poetry with the world.