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#Cicada ( Critiques welcome)
silk sun
stiff sequoia
I like the last stanza more than the first two! What does "Carpets floors in mornings wake" mean...?
silk sun
I like the last stanza more than the first two! What does "Carpets floors in mor...
it's refering to broken branches and leaves that carpet the forest floor after a storm.