<@&968253730841567284> <@&1116088175618699345> constructive critique appreciated.
#Ode to the Garden Queen (comments appreciated)
heady thunder
proud stump
The imagery here is phenomenal as well as just the concept of describing people as being children of a certain season
The only critique I could give is that the rhyme scheme is sometimes inconsistent but overall the poem is very beautiful
heady thunder
The only critique I could give is that the rhyme scheme is sometimes inconsisten...
I agree i have some issues with the rhyming scheme myself.
heady thunder
The imagery here is phenomenal as well as just the concept of describing people ...
I was also kind of going for the idea of growth through the seasons, sort of an allegory of growing into adulthood seen through the lens of a plants growth .