#Loser

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fossil raven
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I was captivated by a young woman,
For more than a year's span,
But lacking confidence within,
My heart wept in despair.

At the sight of her presence,
My heart stirred profoundly,
An indescribable sentiment arose,
Uncharted territory, previously unknown.

Silently I held it within,
A secret locked away,
Concealing my emotions,
Shielded from the world.

Opportunities slipped away,
As I faltered each time,
Unable to reveal my heart's truth,
Convinced of my inadequacies.

"I am insufficient,
A craven soul,
Timid and feeble,
In her eyes, a mere shadow."

For I am but a hapless soul.

||i know i know i didnt make reader curious but it is my old one that i found in my archive. criticizes appriciated.||

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still want some criticizes tho

hard nebula
fossil raven
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It's not bad but there are like a trillion variants on this