need help with this please

[patent shale]

I think it’s a very nice foundation

What specifically are you look for help with?

And would you mind pasting the text? @sturdy osprey

[sturdy osprey]

Okay okay

[sturdy osprey]

Like yk just with anything structure stuff to add

Violence
I am an angry person
There’s no wrong to that

I grew up an angry person
I was born to angry people

I lived an angry life
Violence isn’t the answer
Violence was my answer

When I need someone to listen
It wasn’t with the voice of my mouth
It was with the ball of my fist.

[patent shale]

Is your narrative tense intentional?