About Her

[next swift]

it's really simple yet really pretty, you did a great job in my opinion!

[spice stump]

Thank you, man! I really appreciate your words!

[next swift]

no prob! keep up the good work and no pressure!

[spice stump]

I really needed to hear that. Thanks pal!

[floral geode]

this poem is so pretty, i love it!
especially the first two lines, it made me smile when i read it

[rigid iron]

Maybe next u could try turn this into a sonnet :

It works well as a love poem

[spice stump]

Thank you very much! Yeah, the first lines are the inspiration for the poem.

[spice stump]

Sure! A sonnet, eh? I have never written one. I may give it a try. Thanks for the suggestion.

[rigid iron]

Yesss expand ur poetry knowledge :))

Trying new forms help you understand word choice, meter and overall improve poetry

Aswell as being able to add more symbolism behind ur work as a form can be representative of many different aspects

Like sonnets relating to love

I really loved this poem

It flows well

Along with the descriptions

Now image that as a sonnet :)))

[spice stump]

Yeah. I normally use symbolism in haiku and free-verse poetry. In lyrical, I usually use metaphors/simile, imagery, hyperbole, etc.

[rigid iron]

That's good

[spice stump]

That's true.

[spice stump]

Thanks!

[rigid iron]

It also makes u look cool 😎

And ur very cool 😎

[spice stump]

Actually, that's a good idea. Let me write a sonnet next

[rigid iron]

If u need any help

I am here@!

U can dm or ping

[spice stump]

Sure. I will let you know.

[rigid iron]

Let's move to poetry discussion and I csn give little briefing on sonnets

[warm minnow]

The poem you shared beautifully captures a sense of adoration and affection for someone. The use of vivid imagery and specific actions helps to paint a picture of intimacy and love.
In this passionate verse, you have captured the very essence of love.
I am lucky that I met your beautiful words.
Thx for this precious piece bro. 👏✨😊