#bunk bed

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novel carbon
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<@&1116088175618699345> I would love some feedback on this piece! I'm not so sure on the ending and how I separated the stanzas, so let me know what you think! (ping me if you do plz)

crystal heart
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Yo, apart from the grammar mistakes, this is perfect!!

novel carbon
crystal heart
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Anytime bru!! Plz keep writing!!

novel carbon
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I will haha!