Fore-wordplay

[storm linden]

Human psychology and Complexity.. beautioouoauaiaiful

Correct me if I'm wrong, but the ending was not a joke but part of the poem right?

If so, I love how bold the statement is.

Also

"to rule you need to recognize different subtle similarities between the unrecognizable mammalian communication machine"

I quite like this view, to rule over another, you need to understand the complexity of communication.

[marble blaze]

Yeah the ending line is supposed to feel serious and kind of like a "mic drop" of sorts, wasn't sure whether to leave it in tbh but it felt like part of the piece so I did.

Thanks so much for the feeback!

[solar reef]

Can I be honest? This was tough for me to understand 😢... Maybe i didn't pay much attention... I'll read it later. I felt a bit of words repetition from previous poems, which is obvious and proves that the poem is actually a part of ur own thoughts. In my opinion it had a more philosophical/psychological aspect that is little new to me.