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quiet sky Jun 3, 2023, 10:45 PM

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I love the kaleidoscope metaphor and the knowing oneself topic, late but happy birthday 🎂

ornate mulch Jun 5, 2023, 6:00 AM

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@quiet sky Lmao, about 6 months late but thank you haha, was just looking for a catchy juxtaposition of ideas between the grand scale of thoughts for a hypothetical thinking Saturn and this tiny human.. the 2 lines together are supposed to be quite sterile and just show the difference in scale but I can see where the emotion and a sense of crying out to something so big and uncaring (ooh a god.. Saturn.. damn I'm good :p lmao) could come from.

Thanks for the feedback!

true sonnet Jun 5, 2023, 9:50 AM

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Genius?

ornate mulch Jun 5, 2023, 9:57 AM

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true sonnet Genius?

Sarcasm? If so please add some detail, I genuinely like constructive criticism

true sonnet Jun 5, 2023, 9:59 AM

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Nope, genuine. I love poems like that which don't bind themselves in technicalities of complex literary concepts. I loved how u penned down such deep thought in some sentences. I loved the inserted pic too... 🦕

ornate mulch Jun 5, 2023, 10:01 AM

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Oh haha, maybe I play too many online games, I can't help but infer sarcasm from such a comment.
Thank you so much that means a great deal!

ornate mulch Jun 5, 2023, 10:02 AM

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true sonnet Nope, genuine. I love poems like that which don't bind themselves in technicalit...

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