#Gone again

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wooden bloom
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Blood on the floor, where a dead man lay
The curtains were closed, the floor had been swept.
The people come in, just look away
Through the lattice as poison ivy crept.

As the bed stays in place, no one comes in
But the wind still blows non-stop, on and on
The dark room that is left is filled with sin
And the room will forever be lost upon

bed demons of the night no longer claw
Because there’s no one, It’s there place of life
At last, without no one the terrors thaw
And so, briefly ends the routine of strife

All was left, was the dreadful mess of art
The mess that could never be loved with heart
(what do you think i should change?) <@&968253730841567284>

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what do you think 0-0?

tropic stone
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Yess

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I got a little busy

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Sorry

tropic stone
wooden bloom
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its fine

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does it like make sense

tropic stone
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The emotions are conveyed in a beautiful way

wooden bloom
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what emotions does it give off?

tropic stone
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I don't really think you should change anything

wooden bloom
tropic stone
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Helplessness

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And freedom

wooden bloom
tropic stone
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I like that it has a dark theme

wooden bloom
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mhm

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tyty for looking at my poem

tropic stone
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There's nothing to change

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It fine to me