#Nature's last words to Love (partially Inspired by minecrafts end poem)

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thorn blaze
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Her loving touch leaves many in a world of peace. I wake up to her singing great songs of joy, I breathe in the air she created for me.

One may easily forget that problems exist in this world with her. After all her warm sunlight smiles and cool fresh breaths are like a world of their own. It's sad humans hurt her so bad, I wish I could hug her but she slips from my grasp every time I reach for her. Like me, she too will grow old and die. Oh how sad it is indeed, but focus not on her end but her present.

Kids smiling and laughing in her forests, her rain that covers me in a cool and comfortable embrace, her mountains that reach to the sky where only the birds take flight, her lakes, her fog, her children, her lover, her forests, her love for me. All of her is something to enjoy. When death comes for her she shall hug him and say "It was great while it lasted". She turns to me and says "I love you"
and she says "You have raised life well"
and she said "All the emotions are within you"
and she said "You are stronger than you know"
and she said "You are the light"
and she said "The darkness you know is within you"
and she said "The light you seek is within you"
and she said "You are not alone"
and she said "You are Love, I am Nature. Death hates Life, Sound hates Silence, Peace hates War, but we all live together inside of this world we created. We live together because Love doesn't get rid of War, Sound, Death or any of the others that hurt humans. Love understands them. Love holds Loneliness while she cries. Love picks War up off the ground and calms him down. Love and Death come hand in hand. Love and Nature created Life". Nature turned to Love and smiled as she faded away.
"Love forgave Death"

random pebble
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Minecraft, the middle part is from minecraft. It's still good tho

thorn blaze
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I had to morph it to fit Love instead of a block man from a video game!

random pebble
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Great poem

thorn blaze
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OKI!

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Nature's last words to Love (Inspired by minecrafts end poem)

runic ridge
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I really like the execution of this poem, like the dynamic and flow is great, it drives the message home. I do find it a bit odd you personified that Earth is preaching about these ideas, it seems like things a monk would say

thorn blaze
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well that's exactly the problem

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earth is being destroyed because we don't see her value

runic ridge
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Do you believe that Earth can die?

thorn blaze
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yes

runic ridge
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i see

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thorn blaze
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the earth dies when it can no longer support life

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That's exactly what I meant by my point

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Ur point is saying that earth's only purpose is to provide things for us and other living things

thorn blaze
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Yes but earth can't die

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It's a big rock

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Rocks can not die

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The organisms on earth can die

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Earth can not

thorn blaze
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the earth is more than a rock

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the earth is the planet and the things on it

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It is rocks, abiotic, biotic, water

thorn blaze
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to me at least

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I see ur point

thorn blaze
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I'm only 15

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However I don't belive earth can die

thorn blaze
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i dont know much

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I'm only 16

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I don't mean to sound rude, sorry if it comes off that way

thorn blaze
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yeah!

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ik!

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love you all!

runic ridge
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If your point is that Earth is dying and we need to admire its beauty, the the lines (and she said "All the emotions are within you")
(and she said "You are stronger than you know")
(and she said "You are the light") and (and she said "You are not alone") feels out of place,

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like I don't understand what is the message is, if Earth is in danger, why would she preach and compliment the people she is being endangered by

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That part of the poem isn't really theirs

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It's from the game minecraft

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I think u are the light could have a meaning If u add multiple lines about it

runic ridge
thorn blaze
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Nature's last words to Love (partially Inspired by minecrafts end poem)

runic ridge
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interesting... maybe i could write a poetry that twists your unconditional love, perhaps.

wind goblet
gritty pelican
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that has really good repetition

thorn blaze
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