Help me with this poem

[opaque vault]

CAN ANYONE COME UP WITH A GOOD LINE FOR MY POEM ABOUT SOMEONE WHO FOUND LOVE AND GOT DUMPED THAN START FOCUSING ON SELF IMPROVEMENT AND IN THE END HE BECAME THE BEST PERSON HE COULD AND HAPPY EVER AFTER PLS HELPP

here's what i wrote so far

... = the places that im stuck on

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[somber dome]

Maybe this:

The anticipation got too great.
I could no longer wait when I pushed the thorn into my side thus,
leaving you behind

This could represent moving on from someone for yourself, even though it hurts.