#A stars supernova

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robust steppe
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it sparkles and shines
and glimmers and twirls
it glows and glimmers, so divine
it spins and dazzles and flickers and whirls

it looks so happy
smiling and blinking
it makes me wonder
what is it thinking...

"am I shining enough
does anyone notice
I look rather rough
ill dazzle until night time closes"

every night, I watch this star
I notice it slowly fading
I see it glimmering from afar
but its slowly started decaying

"I'm getting too weak
I cant go on
I'll dance for one last time this week
and then I'll have to be gone"

it gradually stars to twirl no more
my favourite star is over
I don't see my shiny orb anymore
my star has supernova

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it was supposed to say night time lol, feel free to suggest anything or help with wording (:

fervent radish
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hello u seem like ur rlly good at poetry lol

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is there any chance u could check out my poem and make some edits on it

robust steppe