also is there anything i could to make the ending less dry?
#need help reviewing/correcting/finishing up this poem
neat aspen
native plover
It would probably be good if you sent the poem
neat aspen
HAHHA man sorry i deleted the poem ðŸ˜
formal sail
it's a beautiful poem :') brought tears to my eyes
really, the line "Original message was deleted." is so powerful- the full stop so harsh
it makes you question- is anything original? what was the poet trying to say?
why was the poem deleted? is it a comment on censorship?!?
/s
neat aspen
really, the line "Original message was deleted." is so powerful- the full stop s...
ðŸ˜LMAOO! the sarcasm almost felt like you were actually serious( or maybe it’s just me not being able to detect it)
oblique lion