Thoughts Of A Flightless Dove | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

sly moat Apr 12, 2023, 6:16 PM

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lime mantle Apr 12, 2023, 7:17 PM

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This is truly incredible, how long have you been writing for?

sly moat Apr 12, 2023, 8:01 PM

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Thank you for reading it 💕
I've been writing since I was 11,
so I've been writing for about sixteen years. >.<
This is something I just wrote up today,
I'm happy it's reading out alright

next prairie Apr 12, 2023, 8:10 PM

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this poem got me emotional, its beautiful

sly moat Apr 12, 2023, 10:42 PM

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Thank you for reading it

pale wharf Apr 12, 2023, 10:42 PM

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stunning, really beautiful writing

sly moat Apr 13, 2023, 1:16 AM

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https://tenor.com/view/animu-anime-zero-two-darling-in-the-franxx-thank-you-gif-15487149

Tenor

pale wharf Apr 13, 2023, 7:19 AM

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Pretty sick.

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Still reads like a 1st draft though.

sly moat Apr 13, 2023, 10:40 AM

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pale wharf Still reads like a 1st draft though.

Hm how so?

pale wharf Apr 13, 2023, 10:41 AM

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I dunno, could be just me.

sly moat Apr 13, 2023, 10:42 AM

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This is a more simple style of freeform. It's supposed to read more like a letter but hm.. is it the rhyme scheme?

pale wharf Apr 13, 2023, 10:42 AM

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Who's got tired hands?

sly moat Apr 13, 2023, 10:43 AM

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People holding onto things too long

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Clenched fists, also everything feels tired when you're depressed.

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It's a metaphor more than literal

pale wharf Apr 13, 2023, 10:59 AM

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Pretty loveable.

#Thoughts Of A Flightless Dove